| 1 | It is convinient for people to shopping online because they can buy products anytime and anywhere |
| 2 | Online shopping of everyone is convenient because they can buy products in whenever and wherever. |
| 3 | it is convinient for people to buy by online because they can purchase anything products everytime, everywhere. |
| 4 | People easily compare prices of them same product on the Internet |
| 5 | people easily compare the price of same product on the internet |
| 6 | Everybody easily compare price of the same products on the internet. |
| 7 | It is helpful when people go to the store in person because they can ask questions and get answers immediately |
| 8 | It is very useful for everyone to come on site the store because they can make question and get answer. |
| 9 | it is helpful for people to visit a store because they can ask question and get answers immediately |
| 10 | It is useful for people to visit a store in person because they can ask questions and gets answer immediately |
| 11 | Be useful when people come directly to the store because they can ask questions and get answers immediately. |
| 12 | It is risky for people to shopping online because they can’t check everything in person |
| 13 | It is very risk for everyone to shopping online because they can not check everything directly. |
| 14 | it is risky for people to buy product online because they can’t check product in person |
| 15 | Everyone comes on-site the different stores in order to find a product will take much time will take much time. |
| 16 | It take a long time for eveyone to go directly to different stores to find a product. |
| 17 | It is best to start at least 1 month in advance the dinner so that you have enough time to do everything. |
| 18 | There are many good food service provider in the area to choose from. |
| 19 | I alway event organization in the meeting room in order to save money. |
| 20 | It have many good service provide dishes in the area to choose from. |
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